Vision: the artwork is good! I love the way you have painted the details. Even so, you could have put more details and it'd be even more awesome.
Originality: I have seen a few works like yours recently, but what can I say? This is a GJ
Technique: you are very skilled when it's about painting but... Look at her face, it seems a little bit weird to me, specially her nose and mouth. And that left hand looks twisted.
Doesn't she have any weight? Because I don't see any pressure in the box she's sitting in.
Impact: Besides that little mistakes, the result is pretty good. Keep the good job!