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Delight in Random minor. by Tammi-sempai

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Vision: the artwork is good! I love the way you have painted the details. Even so, you could have put more details and it'd be even more awesome.
Originality: I have seen a few works like yours recently, but what can I say? This is a GJ :)
Technique: you are very skilled when it's about painting but... Look at her face, it seems a little bit weird to me, specially her nose and mouth. And that left hand looks twisted.
Doesn't she have any weight? Because I don't see any pressure in the box she's sitting in.
Impact: Besides that little mistakes, the result is pretty good. Keep the good job!
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Tammi-sempai Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks soo much for the crit dude :iconcblushplz:
and all the things you mentioned were very helpful indeed. especially her 'weight issue'.
i'll put that into consideration the next time i do a pic like this .

thanks again:iconarigatouplz:
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megasak Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem! :heart:
I just wrote what I thought it didn't look great because, hell yeah, you have potencial!
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Tammi-sempai Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
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