Vision: the artwork is good! I love the way you have painted the details. Even so, you could have put more details and it'd be even more awesome. Originality: I have seen a few works like yours recently, but what can I say? This is a GJ Technique: you are very skilled when it's about painting but... Look at her face, it seems a little bit weird to me, specially her nose and mouth. And that left hand looks twisted. Doesn't she have any weight? Because I don't see any pressure in the box she's sitting in. Impact: Besides that little mistakes, the result is pretty good. Keep the good job!
thanks soo much for the crit dude and all the things you mentioned were very helpful indeed. especially her 'weight issue'. i'll put that into consideration the next time i do a pic like this .
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Originality: I have seen a few works like yours recently, but what can I say? This is a GJ
Technique: you are very skilled when it's about painting but... Look at her face, it seems a little bit weird to me, specially her nose and mouth. And that left hand looks twisted.
Doesn't she have any weight? Because I don't see any pressure in the box she's sitting in.
Impact: Besides that little mistakes, the result is pretty good. Keep the good job!